http://syrraki.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] syrraki.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sirona_fics 2011-02-05 08:20 pm (UTC)

This is readable!!!

also, this line I enjoyed particularly:

Naruto lifts his shirt, but his bare stomach is flat and unmarked. Sasuke stares at it; then, with some effort, makes himself look away.

especially in the middle of such a tense scene XD.

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