Ho My God, you are so made of win! Thank you for this, and also - please please please please be my SasuNaruSasu beta!!! Onegaishimasu! *bows*
I've gone back and fixed the few things you highlighted, but mostly I just squealed like a mad person at all your wonderful comments!
Well, yes, Naruto does remind me of a Van Gogh painting, especially in the anime, and Sasuke is very 'learned and knowledgeable' so he's make the natural connection as well!
Sakura annoys me with her endless Sasuke-Kun I love you's. Mostly she annoys me because it is all mindless. Ino has always been much more subtle. Also, when it comes to het I like going against type - no quarterback and cheerleader for me, thank you! It's the weirder couples that I would ship. But yes, I love Ino here too <3
No, Orochimaru/Kabuto weirds me out too, even though Kabuto is obviously gagging for it. So no babies for you, Orochimaru, you have been a bad puppy! *looks stern* Also, I couldn't imagine Orochimaru wanting something as helpless as a baby, he has such a hard-on for power.
Well, *dithers* I considered changing their heights, but in the end couldn't be bothered. This is very AU anyway.
I'm so totally not into the usual top-bottom roles, I think they should take turns. This characterisation was heavily influenced by the sn_exchange prompt when I was still working on it, and I thought it would take far too long to change everything from the point where I stopped (just before the second break-in), so I thought this would be my requisite SasuNaru-only fic that every author should write ;p
I'm so glad you liked the porn! I've been practicing ;p Sorry for not making the smexing more shared, maybe in the sequel? I think I'm definitely writing one. Also, Sasuke can't let Naruto have a jealous fit in the middle of the restaurant. Best save that fight (and the make-up sex that would swiftly follow) for more private settings.
Oh no, quote away! I'm thrilled to see which lines worked and which ones made you go, 'meh, could be better'. Hense my 'on bended knee' request for betaing!
Also, I'm kind of fed up with Madara. I don't want him cropping up and spoiling the boys' fun! Plus, Orochimaru was totally the more believable villain in this setting - scientist and all.
On the 'moar' side, you'll be pleased to know that your story is complete! I'm just going to give it a final read-through for any typos/ glaring mistakes and will post it this afternoon!
You have no idea how happy your comment made me! Yay for feedback!
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I've gone back and fixed the few things you highlighted, but mostly I just squealed like a mad person at all your wonderful comments!
Well, yes, Naruto does remind me of a Van Gogh painting, especially in the anime, and Sasuke is very 'learned and knowledgeable' so he's make the natural connection as well!
Sakura annoys me with her endless Sasuke-Kun I love you's. Mostly she annoys me because it is all mindless. Ino has always been much more subtle. Also, when it comes to het I like going against type - no quarterback and cheerleader for me, thank you! It's the weirder couples that I would ship. But yes, I love Ino here too <3
No, Orochimaru/Kabuto weirds me out too, even though Kabuto is obviously gagging for it. So no babies for you, Orochimaru, you have been a bad puppy! *looks stern* Also, I couldn't imagine Orochimaru wanting something as helpless as a baby, he has such a hard-on for power.
Well, *dithers* I considered changing their heights, but in the end couldn't be bothered. This is very AU anyway.
I'm so totally not into the usual top-bottom roles, I think they should take turns. This characterisation was heavily influenced by the
I'm so glad you liked the porn! I've been practicing ;p Sorry for not making the smexing more shared, maybe in the sequel? I think I'm definitely writing one. Also, Sasuke can't let Naruto have a jealous fit in the middle of the restaurant. Best save that fight (and the make-up sex that would swiftly follow) for more private settings.
Oh no, quote away! I'm thrilled to see which lines worked and which ones made you go, 'meh, could be better'. Hense my 'on bended knee' request for betaing!
Also, I'm kind of fed up with Madara. I don't want him cropping up and spoiling the boys' fun! Plus, Orochimaru was totally the more believable villain in this setting - scientist and all.
On the 'moar' side, you'll be pleased to know that your story is complete! I'm just going to give it a final read-through for any typos/ glaring mistakes and will post it this afternoon!
You have no idea how happy your comment made me! Yay for feedback!