I don't even know where to start, this was beyond amazing!
I was flickering through the SasuxNaru community one shot tags when I came across this and I was like -blinks.- Oh this looks interesting. And well what do you know... I found the ENTIRE fiction A-MA-ZING, Strange choice of word writing required ;)
It's such a simple plot line and you turned it into something beyond amazing! I'm so glad that at some point in your life the inspiration to write this and finish it off hit you! I was reading the other comments and noticed you said it will have a sequel, has such a thing been completed yet? I'd love to read it!
I'm not even sure what my favorite bit was! I can't figure out if it was their amazing personalities... the plot... or just your writing style. Gyah! I think I should stop with my comment now! Thanks for such a great read!
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I was flickering through the SasuxNaru community one shot tags when I came across this and I was like -blinks.- Oh this looks interesting. And well what do you know... I found the ENTIRE fiction A-MA-ZING, Strange choice of word writing required ;)
It's such a simple plot line and you turned it into something beyond amazing! I'm so glad that at some point in your life the inspiration to write this and finish it off hit you! I was reading the other comments and noticed you said it will have a sequel, has such a thing been completed yet? I'd love to read it!
I'm not even sure what my favorite bit was! I can't figure out if it was their amazing personalities... the plot... or just your writing style. Gyah! I think I should stop with my comment now! Thanks for such a great read!