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steve loves you danno,
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The little ficlet that could

So... I broke my own rules? IT'S ALL H50'S FAULT. Before I knew about Steve and Danny, I never even contemplated writing PWPs (which I've bitched about at length), but, well -- it's Steve. And Danny. And I would (and will) write ALL THE WORDS about those two, quite shamelessly.

If I'm a little incoherent, it's because it's two am and I really should go to bed very soon indeed. I'm feeling all kinds of mellow tonight -- I've had the most fantastic conversation with

quoththewriter, who is made of sunshine and rainbows, and whose fault it is that this thing is cleaned up and I'm actually going to post it at all, because she is An Enabler. ♥ I've also been re-reading the beyond gorgeous Let's Dance Like We Used To by

andrealyn, and now I'm all ready to snuggle under the sheets. The only thing I'm missing is a Steve, but I guess Danno don't share.

Tomorrow I will talk about all my awesome auction winners, and fics, and plot bunnies that are getting out of hand, and how last night I dreamt that Steve was trying to find ice lollies in the shape of hippos to woo Danny with, because everyone likes hippos, right? WTF BRAIN.

So, anyway: this way to the filthy, dirty smut! What is it about, you ask? WELL. Danny calls Steve 'Sir' in the heat of the moment, and Steve... Hmmm. Let's just say he's well pleased, and leave it at that, shall we?

Steve/Danny
Hawaii Five-0
NC-17 liek whoa
~600 words

“Danny, can you just shut up for two goddamn seconds and get back to what you were doing?”

“Yes, sir,” Danny says on a strangled laugh. He’s mostly joking; there’s no way he’s calling Steve ‘sir’ while they’re on the job, although he knows plenty of other people do, cops who back them up, civilians who recognise the authority in Steve’s voice, his stance, the way he carries himself. Steve’s never reacted to it any other way than taking the respect as his due.

So Danny’s just as surprised as him when Steve lets out a breathless moan that sounds like it was startled from his throat. His cock jumps in Danny’s hand, and a drop of precome leaks out of the slit to trail over Danny’s curled fingers. When Danny looks up at him, Steve’s expression remarkably resembles that of a deer caught in the headlights.

“Holy shit,” Danny whispers, face cracking in a delighted, utterly depraved grin. Steve looks abashed. “Or should I say, holy shit, sir?”

Steve can’t stop the whimper that crawls out of his mouth. His hips jerk helplessly, pushing his cock into Danny’s fist. Danny tightens his grasp, rubbing his thumb firmly over the glans. Steve shudders violently under him, and his eyes roll back in his head. His jaw clenches, but he’s not quite there; Danny can see the strain on Steve to let himself go, to let Danny take care of him. So he falls back on what he does best -- he talks.

“Yeah, that’s it,” he murmurs, voice rough with need. “You gonna fuck my fist, sir? You gonna pin me down and make me take it? You gonna make me jerk you off and lick your come off my fingers, until all I know is your taste? You gonna use your come to push two fingers inside me, stretch me, rack me up so much that I’m begging for it, keep me there until you’re hard again, so you can push your cock inside me and fuck me through the bed? Is that what you want, sir?”

Steve is panting now, desperate little sounds that might be Danny’s name. “Please,” Danny hears; it sounds like it’s being torn out of Steve. He’s shaking so bad that Danny’s getting a little worried, but Steve’s pressing his body into Danny’s, not away, so he goes with it, uses his other hand to slip two spit-slicked fingers behind Steve’s balls and inside him, muscles parting like butter for him, Steve’s that turned on, but it’s still not enough--

“Come for me,” Danny asks as he lowers his head to look Steve right in the eye, on fire with the same urgency that is gripping the body he’s sitting astride. “Now, sir.”

Steve breaks apart, bucking so fitfully he almost knocks Danny off, rasping shouts coming out of a throat gone raw from ten minutes of continuous begging, pre-verbal now that he’s finally there. It’s incredible, a rush like no other, to be the one to get Steve like this, wrecked and trusting and undone.

“Fuck me,” Danny says weakly, so hard he’s aching and at the same time feeling like he’s the one sprawled boneless over the sheets, fucked-out and giddy with it. Steve’s eyes are still closed, and there’s a faint, contented smile on his lips -- he looks like he’s basking in the afterglow, and Danny’s happy to let him; at least for a little while, before he straddles Steve’s hips and sets to winding him up all over again.

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Steve and Danny demand porn. They are very demanding characters. I feel your "pain."

I really liked the idea of "sir" turning Steve on that much. He had to have heard it so much in his life in the military but it is definitly something that Danny wouldn't say normally which is the key I'm sure. Danny being respectful for once...or at least sort of.

Anyway, very nicely done. And hot.

BTW...all your tags cracked me up. Thats a lot of tags for a short PWP. :D

Yay! I'm so happy it pleases, it's my first ever straight-up PWP, I honest to god swore once I would never write one! :D IT'S ALL STEVE AND DANNY'S FAULT. YUS.

I kind of got that scene in my head, and it would not go away. I think it's something about Danny calling him that and meaning it, because for all he calls Steve a goof twenty times a day, Danny really respects him, I think. I can't ever see Danny calling it him for real, of course, but it's a fun little fantasy, I guess! :D WELL, I COULDN'T HELP IT, AND NEITHER COULD STEVE, SO THERE. XP

Oh god, I know. I crack myself up sometimes. Er. My excuse is that I can't quite believe myself right now? Ahem. /shifty-eyed Apparently I had A Lot to say about it. >.>;;

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shinysylver.livejournal.com - 2011-04-01 23:46 (UTC) - Expand

I love this!!

♥!

......nrnf.

I'm choosing to take this as a good sign! XP ♥!

guhhhhh. huge kink for dirty talk especially if they get turned on by a certain word :D

love it!

Oh god, I know. I feel like it's a bit of a cliche, that Danny talks all the time, but, well -- he kinda does a bit. I have a feeling Steve can learn to appreciate it, in certain scenarios! ;P

Yay! <3

*swallows*

Wow!

\0/ Excellent! :D

OMG - first of all the PWP portion of this is just totally hot and humorous at the same time (Steve getting off on "Sir" has me snickering), but then your notes and tags just added to the fun and left me laughing out loud. 2am writing suits you very well!!!

Oh god, it's 3am now, what even is this. I actually had this written for a while; the rest of this entry is totally me being a goof, though! :D The tags... I have no excuse bar the aforementioned 2am?

I think it's not so much the 'Sir' as it is who's saying it, if you know what I mean? Because, let's be honest, Danny? Is not in a million years gonna say it unless he's being a smartass. XD

I'm so happy you enjoyed the whole thing, silly as it is! <3

I get the feeling Danny's going to enjoy this new discovery a lot. :D Very nicely done!

Danny is going to exploit his newfound advantage shamelessly, I am certain! XD He is such a smug bastard! ;P

Thank you so much, darling! <3

*fans self*

Holy fucking... yeah. Yeah, I liked this. Very, very hot subversion of the trope there. I totally see what you did there, and I APPROVE.

:D

I GET DEAN'S STAMP OF APPROVAL! MY NIGHT IS NOW COMPLETE. <3

I am so, so pleased you enjoyed it, darling! It is a trope dear to my heart, ngl, and Steve just lends himself to it so sweetly. How's a girl to resist? :D

Now that is what you call smutabulous. You should do PWP more often because Steve and Danny demand it.

Hee, I'm so plesed you enjoyed it! :D Steve and Danny are such slavedrivers, god. My life, it is hard.

*thud*

oh ouch. what happened? *reads again*

*thud* <--- iz ded

Yaaay! This is a MOST APPROPRIATE REACTION. :D

YOU POSTED IT YOU POSTED IT. ASDFGHJKL;;

YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS. DANNY WINDING STEVE UP LIKE A LITTLE TOY SOLDIER IS MY FAVOURITE THING EVER AND THIS IS DELICIOUS AND LOVELY. ♥

I KNOW, I KNOW!! THIS ONE'S ALL ON YOU, BB!

STEVE IS DANNY'S PERSONAL TOY SOLDIER, OH YES HE IS! HE LOVES IT. XDDD BUT MAN, DOES STEVE KNOW HOW TO WIND DANNY UP, TOO! XP

/smishes!

That was hot! Well done!

Hee, thank you!

WHY LOOK AT THAT PWP RIGHT THERE, HOLY SHIT. IT'S LIKE I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU ANYMORE.

Mmmmmmm, the kink is strong with this one~! *fans self* Very hot, darling, whoo.

HOLY SHIT, I DON'T KNOW MYSELF ANYMORE, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED. DD: REMEMBER HOW I WASN'T GOING TO POST IT BEFORE I'D WRITTEN A STORY AROUND IT? YEAH, ME NEITHER. /shakes head at self

Whee, thanks, love! I... kinda broke myself with that one, jfc. WHO KNEW I WAS SUCH A KINKY BITCH? ...OH, WAIT.

I... HAVE HAD THOUGHTS. ABOUT TIES. AND STEVE TRUSSED UP AND OPEN. AND JUST. I HAVE TO STOP WRITING SHIT LIKE THAT, FUCKING HELL. 0///0

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zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com - 2011-04-02 11:24 (UTC) - Expand

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sirona-gs.livejournal.com - 2011-04-02 11:29 (UTC) - Expand

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zolac-no-miko.livejournal.com - 2011-04-02 11:31 (UTC) - Expand

Goddamnit! that was hawt with an 'aw' not an 'o'.

:D Awesome! \0/

mmmmm DAMN! *O*

Hee, thanks! :D

Holy shit. Unf.

\0/ Yay!

Bloody helll, that was scorching hot, I've even got shivers up my spine.

Wow, excellent! That's great to hear! \0/ I never know how people are going to take the crazy goings on in my head! :D

pure, nothing but smut=great ingredients
loved it !!

Brilliant, I'm so glad! \0/

Wow. That's just...wow.

\0/ I'm so happy my kinky little brain pleases! :D

THIS IS SO FUCKING DELICIOUS. Steve's reaction and Danny knowing exactly what to do, and doing what he does best - talking. Yes, OF COURSE, his talking and calling him sir would be a turn on. Danny should talk like that more often.

<333

Er, hi.

:DDDDDDD

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <3 Yes, Danny should totally talk like that more often! XD I think I broke myself a little with that one! HNNNGGGG DANNY HNNNNGGGG.

LOL, hi, babe! <3

MY OWN PANTIES SPONTANEOUSLY COMBUSTED WHEN I WROTE/THOUGHT OF THIS.

You know what I'm like with smut, though! THERE IS BOUND TO BE MORE, EACH ONE DIRTIER THAN THE ONE BEFORE. /0\

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prettypriestess.livejournal.com - 2011-05-09 16:09 (UTC) - Expand

Fuck me dead.

Needed a cold shower after this ;)

:D :D :D \0/

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